Who Knows?

“Just keep calm and let me handle it,” he said. The argument could’ve ended long ago, but neither was willing to budge. Compromise had been out of the question, but now she was weary. She handed over the reins to him because he claimed to know so much. From him she learned the invaluable lesson of trusting her intuition.

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© LeTara Moore 2016

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7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. justuscreek
    Aug 29, 2016 @ 22:39:32

    Great post, you say just enough to make me think but not so much that you’re trying to convince me of something.

    Reply

  2. Nam H Nguyen
    Aug 29, 2016 @ 23:24:45

    Well written! 🙂

    Reply

  3. Susan Leighton
    Dec 06, 2016 @ 12:48:37

    LeTara- I like the way you are brief with your dialogue but you feel the tension. Less is more
    By limiting superfluous description, you allow the reader to extract their own meaning. Brava!

    Reply

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